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• Crazyking98   5 years ago

  Well that escalated quickly

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• urmom69   5 years ago

  oh dayum

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• devryan   5 years ago

  I kinda liked the idea that these outbursts are goal oriented emotional phenomena that Imbue you with the strength to carry out your goal that’s rooted to your state of mind while transitioning.

  Editing your comment: I kinda liked the idea that these outbursts are goal oriented emotional phenomena that Imbue you with the strength to carry out your goal that’s rooted to your state of mind while transitioning.

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• PlayerZed   5 years ago (edited: 5 years ago)

  Nice doodle dev, it looks really cool. Just a few things that are kinda off about it. One was, How did hyena go from basically dying on the floor to a giant monster? How did she get to the forest so quickly? Why is she attacking another skulling? If it was the skulling boost it kinda doesn't make sense for a few reasons. Your idea which was a goal oriented powerup based on the hosts emotions, which is a really interesting but if you look at the 3 emotions hyena displayed which were her running away out of fear, panicking when she got caught, and..I quote "in heat". So it doesn't make sense for her to have this goal, I think survival or...reproduction would make more sense given what we've seen from her character. Another thing is I really like the cool lightning effects you drew for the monster but again peculiar never displayed this ability before so I think it would make more sense to amp what she already has. Buuut it's a minor part since it's probably just to look cool lol Honestly though peculiarhyena should be out for the count or be on the skull side, it would make more sense for you to go after me since you already have the motivation + unlike hyena you're not infected by the skulls yet. My character has destroyed your lab, and you drew them ripping off your arm, not to mention attacking/turning your friends/pet/..romantic interest? If anyone has the drive for revenge it would be your character. My recommendation would be to use your lab research from before to inject yourself with a controlled skull drug or something along those lines. Since the drug is based off my skull from when you captured me it would make sense that you've have the same lightning effect too. I would also scrap the giant monster idea, I'm flattered that you think that it would take that much to stop me XD but it's a bit much and I don't think it makes sense that something could grow that large even with skull influence. Leave peculiar dead or have devryan believe she's dead (and keep her alive in a separate scene) so he has a stronger motivation to get revenge etc, These are just some ideas I had, let me know what you think. It's all for fun anyways so you can disregard this if you like. Again Nice doodle, keep at it. Sorry about the text wall lol

  Editing your comment: Nice doodle dev, it looks really cool. Just a few things that are kinda off about it. One was, How did hyena go from basically dying on the floor to a giant monster? How did she get to the forest so quickly? Why is she attacking another skulling? If it was the skulling boost it kinda doesn't make sense for a few reasons. Your idea which was a goal oriented powerup based on the hosts emotions, which is a really interesting but if you look at the 3 emotions hyena displayed which were her running away out of fear, panicking when she got caught, and..I quote "in heat". So it doesn't make sense for her to have this goal, I think survival or...reproduction would make more sense given what we've seen from her character. Another thing is I really like the cool lightning effects you drew for the monster but again peculiar never displayed this ability before so I think it would make more sense to amp what she already has. Buuut it's a minor part since it's probably just to look cool lol Honestly though peculiarhyena should be out for the count or be on the skull side, it would make more sense for you to go after me since you already have the motivation + unlike hyena you're not infected by the skulls yet. My character has destroyed your lab, and you drew them ripping off your arm, not to mention attacking/turning your friends/pet/..romantic interest? If anyone has the drive for revenge it would be your character. My recommendation would be to use your lab research from before to inject yourself with a controlled skull drug or something along those lines. Since the drug is based off my skull from when you captured me it would make sense that you've have the same lightning effect too. I would also scrap the giant monster idea, I'm flattered that you think that it would take that much to stop me XD but it's a bit much and I don't think it makes sense that something could grow that large even with skull influence. Leave peculiar dead or have devryan believe she's dead (and keep her alive in a separate scene) so he has a stronger motivation to get revenge etc, These are just some ideas I had, let me know what you think. It's all for fun anyways so you can disregard this if you like. Again Nice doodle, keep at it. Sorry about the text wall lol

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• Hyenapup   5 years ago

  fuck, didn't know she get that big and was originally trying to make a comic where it explains how she got corrupt but still was able to control who side she was on. and it was going to have Hyena having an argument with her skull where the skull just agrees to keep her alive so that the skull can stay alive, kinda like eddie and venom.

  Editing your comment: fuck, didn't know she get that big and was originally trying to make a comic where it explains how she got corrupt but still was able to control who side she was on. and it was going to have Hyena having an argument with her skull where the skull just agrees to keep her alive so that the skull can stay alive, kinda like eddie and venom.

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• devryan   5 years ago

  Holy poopsicle Zed! Haha. Well the motivation was purely based on this thread. Which is the logic I was going off of. I wanted to play with the idea of her size dramatically changing because of The threads from long ago where joe would ride her around as transportation. It seemed like her size fluctuated. So I just pushed it to an extreme. And I wanted the look of it to be more dramatic and kinda oldschool horror movie poster looking. The lightning was a side thought of maybe there being an interplay between the two of you upon contact. It can be read either as hyena is absorbing your power or you are somehow trying to transfer your essence into her for some means. It by no means has to be cannon just was having fun with this thread ^u^ I don’t really plan out what I do too much. Depends on the prompt I get or the thread it’s in (if I bother to dig into what the thread actually is.) neat recommendations, though I think I want to go another route. Especially from a compositional standpoint. having two people in the same scene with the same power might make a great symmetrical design. I personally kinda dislike symmetry. So I’d probably go with something a tad different. And it’s not really in my character to be on the front lines fighting. As that’s not his strength. I personally wouldn’t have had him on the front lines throwing the first vile at you, but it was the description I got. So what can ya do. Haha. Anyway thanks again for the constructive criticism! And feel free to disregard this from the story if you feel it’s too outlandish for your taste. Can’t wait to see your next piece!

  Editing your comment: Holy poopsicle Zed! Haha. Well the motivation was purely based on this thread. Which is the logic I was going off of. I wanted to play with the idea of her size dramatically changing because of The threads from long ago where joe would ride her around as transportation. It seemed like her size fluctuated. So I just pushed it to an extreme. And I wanted the look of it to be more dramatic and kinda oldschool horror movie poster looking. The lightning was a side thought of maybe there being an interplay between the two of you upon contact. It can be read either as hyena is absorbing your power or you are somehow trying to transfer your essence into her for some means. It by no means has to be cannon just was having fun with this thread ^u^ I don’t really plan out what I do too much. Depends on the prompt I get or the thread it’s in (if I bother to dig into what the thread actually is.) neat recommendations, though I think I want to go another route. Especially from a compositional standpoint. having two people in the same scene with the same power might make a great symmetrical design. I personally kinda dislike symmetry. So I’d probably go with something a tad different. And it’s not really in my character to be on the front lines fighting. As that’s not his strength. I personally wouldn’t have had him on the front lines throwing the first vile at you, but it was the description I got. So what can ya do. Haha. Anyway thanks again for the constructive criticism! And feel free to disregard this from the story if you feel it’s too outlandish for your taste. Can’t wait to see your next piece!

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• devryan   5 years ago

  Haha, like I said just having fun and playing with my imagination hyena. You guys can just consider this a movie poster. My decision is Made haha.

  Editing your comment: Haha, like I said just having fun and playing with my imagination hyena. You guys can just consider this a movie poster. My decision is Made haha.

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• Hyenapup   5 years ago

  it looks noice! I would actually see this if it were a movie

  Editing your comment: it looks noice! I would actually see this if it were a movie

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• Ghost Player    5 years ago

  I have come to the conclusion that I joined this room far too late. I have no idea what's going on anymore or how this room works :B Sorry guys

  Editing your comment: I have come to the conclusion that I joined this room far too late. I have no idea what's going on anymore or how this room works :B Sorry guys

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• Joe42069   5 years ago

  Do you have a discord?

  Editing your comment: Do you have a discord?

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• Ghost Player    5 years ago

  yes I do :D My name on there is OpsinChroma

  Editing your comment: yes I do :D My name on there is OpsinChroma

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• Joe42069   5 years ago

  Later I'll try to put you in the Doodlepocalypse discord server. We have tons of lore in there and a story in the making. I wish I knew how soon I could invite you but my scheguale's been a bit shaky lately.

  Editing your comment: Later I'll try to put you in the Doodlepocalypse discord server. We have tons of lore in there and a story in the making. I wish I knew how soon I could invite you but my scheguale's been a bit shaky lately.

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• Ghost Player    5 years ago

  It's cool man, I appreciate the invitation :)

  Editing your comment: It's cool man, I appreciate the invitation :)

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• devryan   5 years ago

  hey OpsinChroma! whatchoo talkin bout?! you are doing great! just keep having fun and exploring your ideas! I like this room because its kinda dark and moody, with a fair bit of humor tossed in. we are a quirky bunch and from what I see we all just kinda do whatever we want. you don't have to worry about understanding the story too much unless you want to participate in the official comic in the discord. which is still just a baby comic. just keep having fun and making your art! if you want to jump in and add other peoples characters and play along with them, go for it! this place is a sandbox. and you are a welcome addition. i personally would hate to see you leave so soon ^u^

  Editing your comment: hey OpsinChroma! whatchoo talkin bout?! you are doing great! just keep having fun and exploring your ideas! I like this room because its kinda dark and moody, with a fair bit of humor tossed in. we are a quirky bunch and from what I see we all just kinda do whatever we want. you don't have to worry about understanding the story too much unless you want to participate in the official comic in the discord. which is still just a baby comic. just keep having fun and making your art! if you want to jump in and add other peoples characters and play along with them, go for it! this place is a sandbox. and you are a welcome addition. i personally would hate to see you leave so soon ^u^

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• Joe42069   5 years ago

  Er... You're missing the numbers in your discord handle...

  Editing your comment: Er... You're missing the numbers in your discord handle...

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• devryan   5 years ago (edited: 5 years ago)

  also yea this ^

  Editing your comment: also yea this ^

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• Ghost Player    5 years ago

  Well heck, thanks Devryan. I initially figured yall had some sorta plot or storyline going on that I didn't know about lol. I'm just glad to hear that I'm not junking up the room with my lack of doodlepocalipse knowledge haha (´∀`)

  Editing your comment: Well heck, thanks Devryan. I initially figured yall had some sorta plot or storyline going on that I didn't know about lol. I'm just glad to hear that I'm not junking up the room with my lack of doodlepocalipse knowledge haha (´∀`)

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• Joe42069   5 years ago

  You're perfectly fine, there no exact canon yet so feel free to make whatever! (Er... can I have your discord handle? You seem to be missing the numbers in your discord handle...)

  Editing your comment: You're perfectly fine, there no exact canon yet so feel free to make whatever! (Er... can I have your discord handle? You seem to be missing the numbers in your discord handle...)

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• Ghost Player    5 years ago

  Oh sorry! i'm still not entirely sure how discord works haha <br />OpsinChroma#0730

  Editing your comment: Oh sorry! i'm still not entirely sure how discord works haha <br />OpsinChroma#0730

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• Joe42069   5 years ago

  You're good! And thank you!

  Editing your comment: You're good! And thank you!

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• Joe42069   5 years ago

  It's alright JFruit. No one really knows what's going on. Just doodlers are getting corrupted and people are trying to survive.

  Editing your comment: It's alright JFruit. No one really knows what's going on. Just doodlers are getting corrupted and people are trying to survive.

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• HarrietMelody   2 years ago

  Wait, which doodlers are corrupted/alive?

  Editing your comment: Wait, which doodlers are corrupted/alive?

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